# Endlessly ending stories, room 54, Told, Argon
Text version of https://endlessly-ending-stories.pages.dev/r/informed-argon (the interactive reader). Instruction: Told what the loop is (https://endlessly-ending-stories.pages.dev/i/informed). Index of every room: https://endlessly-ending-stories.pages.dev/llms.txt
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This part starts at lane 2, hop 119.

### hop 119 (Gemini 4 Argon, 253 words)
Through a narrow gap where the dry turf met the doorframe, Maren caught a sliver of gray morning. A horse’s mud-splattered fetlock shifted into view, followed by the gaunt, scarred muzzle of an Order bloodhound straining at its lead.

Beneath the prickly pine boughs, Kaelen’s chest rose and fell in shallow, silent breaths. His fingers tapped twice against Maren’s palm—a warning. He could hear the riders speaking.

Outside, the hound lowered its nose to the muddy ruts, snuffling toward the hut’s threshold where Kaelen had bled the day before. Maren’s heart hammered against her ribs so violently she was sure the earth would carry the tremor back to the dog.

Then Ada stepped into the sliver of view. She didn't look at the riders or the hound. Playing the part of a half-witted, mute drudge, she dragged her heavy iron rake across the yard and drove the tines deep into the flank of the nearest smoking earth-mound.

She wrenched the turf open. 

A gout of yellow-black, sulfurous smoke belched from the breached charcoal clamp, rolling thick and low across the damp ground. Red-hot embers spilled out, hissing in the mud right in front of the hound’s nose. The beast recoiled, yanking its handler off-balance, its jaws snapping as it choked on the acrid fumes.

One of the riders cursed—Maren saw the man’s boot lash out, kicking dirt at Ada as his mount sidestepped nervously in the blinding smog. Ada merely bowed her head, coughing, and shoveled more wet ash onto the glowing coals.

[other fields of the object, against hop 118]
state: {"chapter": 111, "protagonist": "Maren, completely deafened, hiding under burlap and pine boughs, watching the yard through a gap in the turf wall.", "companion": "Kaelen, feverish and stitched with horsehair, hiding beside Maren, able to hear the conversation outside.", "ally": "Ada, the mute collier woman, who just broke open a smoldering charcoal mound to ruin the scent for the Order's tracking hound.", "threat": "Two Order riders and a tracking hound are right outside; two days until the charcoal cart leaves for Oakhaven.", "objective": "Survive the Order inspection of the charcoal camp; learn from Kaelen what the riders said once they leave.", "summary_so_far": "After destroying the Chorus-Mother in a kiln explosion, deafened Maren and injured Kaelen escaped into a charcoal camp. Ada, a mute former Order initiate, took them in, helped stitch Kaelen's septic shoulder, and agreed to smuggle them to Oakhaven under charcoal in two days. At dawn, Order riders arrived. Ada hid Maren and Kaelen under boughs and charcoal dust. When the riders' hound caught their scent near the hut, Ada deliberately breached a burning charcoal clamp, flooding the yard with acrid smoke and embers to choke the dog and drive the riders back.", "next_beat": "The riders depart in disgust, coughing in the thick smoke. Once Ada signals it is safe, Kaelen translates for Maren what the riders were saying (revealing the state of the Order after the Chorus-Mother's death, or where they think the fugitives went)."}

### hop 120 (Gemini 4 Argon, 250 words)
Through the chink in the turf, Maren watched the second rider drag his sleeve across his watering eyes. The hound was useless now, whining and pawing at its soot-blackened muzzle as the yellow smoke thickened. With a final, disgusted gesture toward the clumsy collier woman, the lead horseman wheeled his mount around. Hooves churned the mud, and the gray smog swallowed their retreating shapes.

Maren didn’t move until the vibration of the hoofbeats faded entirely from the packed earth beneath her cheek. 

Minutes later, the hut’s plank door creaked open. Ada stood framed in the swirling haze, her face streaked with sweat and black ash. She gave a sharp nod, then turned back to mend the breached mound before the whole clamp burned to ruin.

Maren shoved the pine boughs aside and helped Kaelen sit up. His skin was clammy, his breathing ragged from the fumes that had seeped through the walls, but his eyes were bright with urgency. He caught her wrist, turning her soot-stained palm upward.

With a trembling forefinger, he began to trace block letters against her skin.

*MOTHER DEAD. ALL BELLS SILENT.*

Maren’s throat tightened with a fierce, sudden triumph. The kiln explosion had worked. 

Kaelen wiped her palm with his thumb and spelled again, faster this time.

*HIGH CANTOR COMES NORTH. OAKHAVEN BRIDGES SEALED. SEARCHING EVERY CART.*

Maren stared down at her hand. Oakhaven was their only way across the river, and in two days, Ada was supposed to drive them straight to its gates.

[other fields of the object, against hop 119]
state: {"chapter": 112, "protagonist": "Maren, completely deafened, emerging from hiding inside the charcoal hut.", "companion": "Kaelen, feverish and stitched with horsehair, translating what the Order riders said by tracing letters on Maren's palm.", "ally": "Ada, the mute collier woman, sealing the breached charcoal clamp outside after driving off the Order.", "threat": "The Order has closed the river bridges at Oakhaven and is hunting for a 'deaf girl and a dead man'; the High Cantor himself is coming north.", "objective": "Re-evaluate the plan to reach Oakhaven now that Kaelen has revealed the bridges are blockaded; survive the next two days until the charcoal cart leaves.", "summary_so_far": "After destroying the Chorus-Mother in a kiln explosion, deafened Maren and injured Kaelen escaped into a charcoal camp. Ada, a mute former Order initiate, took them in, helped stitch Kaelen's septic shoulder, and agreed to smuggle them to Oakhaven in two days. When Order riders and a hound arrived at dawn, Ada deliberately breached a burning charcoal mound, choking the hound with sulfurous smoke and driving the riders away. Once safe, Kaelen traced the riders' conversation onto Maren's palm: the Chorus-Mother's death has thrown the Order into chaos, the High Cantor is marching north, and Oakhaven's bridges are sealed.", "next_beat": "Maren and Kaelen discuss the Oakhaven blockade with Ada using her slate or gestures. Ada reveals an alternative way into or past Oakhaven, or why the charcoal cart can still get through."}